Trifextra: “Chain-smoker”

Prompt:  the Rolling Stones “Sympathy For the Devil”


The devil’s gotta way with me.

I’ve heard his beat before.

Hand me another cigarette

before you leave my door.

Hey, baby, strum my lyre.

Give me another burn

before my bud expires.

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4 Comments on “Trifextra: “Chain-smoker””

  1. jannatwrites
    October 12, 2013 at 5:26 pm #

    This has a beautiful flow to it. For some, cigarettes are a big temptation. (Wish my parents could walk away from them :))


  2. trifectawriting
    October 13, 2013 at 8:13 am #

    “I’ve heard this beat before” – nice line to reflect addiction. Enjoyable read, thanks for linking up!


  3. Draug419
    October 13, 2013 at 2:05 pm #

    This is cool!


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