Shapeshifting 13 #5

Confident; breezy his walk

’til he failed to notice the manhole’s

yawning jaws!

(Use “breeze” in a poem or story containing exactly 13 words. )chimp

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3 Comments on “Shapeshifting 13 #5”

  1. susanwritesprecise
    June 15, 2015 at 8:39 am #

    Evocative writing, Jackie. Nice!


  2. Jen
    June 15, 2015 at 3:12 pm #

    eek!! lol


  3. Tony
    June 15, 2015 at 9:14 pm #

    I love the life you gave to the manhole, and the way you wrote this just gave my imagination’s eyes an orgasm. Well done!


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